Time to have a say, page-14

I think just as likely "On page 67 you have refered to Noisy Scrub "Bards". We assume this is meant to say "Birds", but unfortunately we cannot accept the document in this form. Please clarify and resubmit at your earliest convenience, and we will re-assess. Please bare in mind we are currently assessing several other projects, so expect a 3 to 6 Months wait before receiving further feedback."

As you said previously, probably the smallest details are the biggest holdups if the first draft isn't perfect.