It reads very simply and not to business like really if ask.I am...

It reads very simply and not to business like really if ask.
I am not having a go but it reads like a high school essay, we did good, we did better, we are good, we found a few rich companies, we found some business.
Not really sure what to take away from that presentation apart from a whole lot of happy fluff.......noise I suppose but not professional I feel, my personal feeling only.
This wasn't back to you Dimi, meant to be the fella above with the bright views on us and is obsessed with us for some weird reason.