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Ann: Acquisition Update - The Healthy Mummy, page-3

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    I would hope that a conglomerate-in-the-making has no grammatical errors in their announcements ...
    Problems with this (for me):
    • has commenced and is underway (superfluous)
    • in the ordinary course (expression)
    • since announcement (would be better with 'the' announcement) (x2)
    • and distribute to (incorrect conjugation)
    • oldest and longstanding (incorrect usage)
    • improving user experience and will further drive (sentence structure, incorrect use of conjunction)
    • combination between (incorrect usage)

    Sorry - still feeling very critical of this company. frown.png
 
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