I did originally think they could have opened it with a...

I did originally think they could have opened it with a different paragraph for Point 1 & highlight more positive points on the front page but it isn't as bad as the last one I suppose but still much room for improvement! Anyway, nothing will alter that now so will focus on the future.

Noticed the comment that results are being submitted as a 'late breaking abstract to the 2011 Annual Scientific meeting of American College of Rheumatology'
If you can't find it this snippet is at bottom of Page 2!

So we are now at an interesting & critical crossroad.

Good luck to all.