And feel free to point out what doesn't make sense.
I doubt I could make up for you leaving school early. Two things jump off the page and firstly the inclusion of the number 10 twice in the first sentence makes it gibberish and secondly your comments "are still collapsing at a rate of 10 per day" clearly implies that this situation has been going on for some time which it hasn't!
That my friend was your opening sentence and clearly an incorrect interpretation communicated in a clumsy and bias manner.
