"Spirit > thought = your creation, thought is expressed >...

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    "Spirit > thought = your creation, thought is expressed > communication."

    I forgot to mention something.
    Possibly because you are now studying numbers there is increasing use of mathematical operators in your written text. eg the above quote.

    Unfortunately I was exposed to mathematics from an early age and lot's of it is now ingrained and completely involuntary.
    So every time I see ">" this immediately translates in my head as "greater than". This means I have to make a decision whether that is your intended meaning or you are using it as a truncated arrow of some sort.
    This interrupts the otherwise pleasing technicolour flow of your narrative.

    May I request that if it's an arrow you mean then use "-->" and only ">" if you actually mean "greater than".
    Also, please stop using "" for emphasis. That's what capitals are for.

    Thanks.
 
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