Point out the problematic bits and I'll explain them as best I...

Point out the problematic bits
and I'll explain them as best I can to you.
"Cliched"
"Word salad"
You appear to have little background or understanding of accounting, business, marketing and government from your reply.

For those of us that have, I have mentioned a small number of variables of understanding required to evaluate a business proposition and these are fundamental.
Many other posters have pointed this out on the thread yet you still don't seem to consider them.