Fantastic job.
- I would put either "by" or "through" instead of "from" re analysing the sound of a cough but what you have is also fine
- I try to avoid contractions - so would write "that is" - but again, that's just me and using "that's" is probably fine. Just a personal thing I have on professional letters but contractions do personalise the feel of the letter. So either way
- is it "shareholders' register" - instead of "shareholders register" - or is it simply the "shareholder register" ?? I really don't know but thought I would ask for my own education
- I would add "current" offer from Pfizer - this may get people subconsciously thinking at least that there are more to come.
-into "account" when making investment decisions
A great letter - I am no scholar in writing by any means and may be wrong (I am happy to be corrected)- so take what you like, dish what you don't.
Again, a big thank you.
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