Yes, I did notice the Corporate Spotlight. Can you please get...

Yes, I did notice the Corporate Spotlight.

Can you please get someone to insert the missing word in the first sentence? I think it is "patients" and that it belongs immediately after the number "1500".

Also, could you have the whole thing redrafted by someone who knows how to construct a sentence? The first sentence alone contains three different tenses, and this renders it difficult to read.

The first sentence of the middle paragraph is awful. The second sentence of that paragraph is so bad it makes you almost forget how bad the first one is. We could use the word "with" more times in that sentence, but once would have been enough.

In the final sentence of the Spotlight, it seems the author is trying to say that RAC currently has plans to begin treating solid tumour patients in late 2024 - but instead, we mix tenses again and state that:
(future tense) "from late 2024"
(current tense) "Race has plans to begin".


Please get it fixed