Good video in concept but could (and next time should) have been...

Good video in concept but could (and next time should) have been done better.

We needed a master two shot, filmed all the way through. If possible do the one shots at the same time, or if necessary, film them after the master shot. Then do the close-ups. No zooms.

Much better for post production once you have filmed this way. The result will be much improved.

And we should lose the pretence that Geoff is an amateur when dealing with this product.

I think all the thumbs up are for the fact that there is a video, not necessarily that it has been done particularly well.

A good initiative with some learnings gained.