will i get a response

Dear Mr Annells,

I'm writing to you in response to your current share purchase plan, my family and i have been shareholders and therefor supporters of Lakes Oil for longer than I'd be prepared to admit given that we are still in the red, we chipped in during your last revenue raising at 1c per share and are still hopeful that we may get a return for our hard earned dollar (forever the optimist), but no matter how much sugar coating you apply, including a photo-copied (HIGHLIGHTS OF LAST QUARTER) in the envelope (highlights are usually value improving events) is not going to convince me and my family members to tip in any more of our hard earned money, i think it's about time you gave the shareholders something to get excited about instead of trying to cover your wage bill for the next year or two.