Lots of plot holes. Unbelievable characters that are unrelatable. Story arcs that go nowhere. Questionable moral messaging - which seems to be the main thrust of the book and is what is supposed to keep readers engaged. The main character dies in the first act of the second volume and then the story drifts on for another several hundred pages of people banging on about the main character and how they miss him. Then the book finishes with a psychotic fever dream that makes no sense and leaves the reader pondering WTF.
